This is a good start but there are a few things that need to be worked on. If you go through it again I am sure you will see where you could improve.
I am certain that the photograph on the cover was taken live rather than in a studio. It matches with the main article, which is all about Greenday on tour.
I think you could expand you idea about the overall look of the cover. Does it look neat and tidy? Doe sit looked ordered? Is it busy or calm? These are things to think about.
I think you should write something about the text. Not just the colour or style of font but the language used. What words or phrases are used that make this appeal to it's audience? Give examples.
This is a good start but there are a few things that need to be worked on. If you go through it again I am sure you will see where you could improve.
ReplyDeleteI am certain that the photograph on the cover was taken live rather than in a studio. It matches with the main article, which is all about Greenday on tour.
I think you could expand you idea about the overall look of the cover. Does it look neat and tidy? Doe sit looked ordered? Is it busy or calm? These are things to think about.
I think you should write something about the text. Not just the colour or style of font but the language used. What words or phrases are used that make this appeal to it's audience? Give examples.