A good start again but there needs to be more detail. You could give examples of the writing style. What words are used to attract this audience. As this is your second cover, is there anything you can see here which is the same as the Kerrang cover? You can compare the covers to look at the similarities and the differences
A good start again but there needs to be more detail. You could give examples of the writing style. What words are used to attract this audience. As this is your second cover, is there anything you can see here which is the same as the Kerrang cover? You can compare the covers to look at the similarities and the differences
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